I really enjoyed the style of it, the cadence and rhythm were easy to float on, but I do not understand the ending. I wish I did, I’m sure it’s interesting. It has stayed with me the past 24 hrs since reading it. I keep going back to it to try to make sense of it.
For a little bit there, I was Junie, feeling vaguely foreign and struggling with the rest of his world. Perhaps I just empathized with him, but your stories cast a spell. Excellent work.
I really enjoyed the style of it, the cadence and rhythm were easy to float on, but I do not understand the ending. I wish I did, I’m sure it’s interesting. It has stayed with me the past 24 hrs since reading it. I keep going back to it to try to make sense of it.
For a little bit there, I was Junie, feeling vaguely foreign and struggling with the rest of his world. Perhaps I just empathized with him, but your stories cast a spell. Excellent work.
Beautiful. Been a reader for most of my 68 years and this piece is being filed under VERY good. MORE! (please :)
this was so moving
Beautiful! A whole book of short stories like this would be awesome ❤️
I am a dunce. I do not understand the ending?
Me neither. Would someone clever please explain?
This was so captivating! The subtlety is beautiful. I love a story that encourages interpretation. What a gift you have.
Oh - I like that.
Thank you
I enjoyed this - evocative, nostalgic, melancholy …
Very haunting
🥺
This was wonderful. 💖
Well done!
Great short! Good story and shift.
Whoa
That was very good. I really enjoyed it